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           As a writing teacher working in a technology-obsessed district, I wanted to know how the technology that surrounds me could also help me.  Beach Middle School has two computer labs, plus computers in each classroom.  The administration is talking about wireless laptops and video streaming software.  They are beginning to equip sixth graders with laptops as part of an Anytime, Anywhere Learning initiative.  I look around at these projects and think, how can I use these tools to help my students learn?  Students enter 7th grade with very basic skills and many varied writing deficiencies.  The crucial question is, can technology assist students while they write, and ultimately improve their writing? 

      
Integrating technology into writing instruction is a very large subject.  I looked to my students’ writing to guide me.  As I began to research, I was quickly overwhelmed by the amount of information I found.  I had to severely narrow my focus to prevent myself from drowning in articles.  I decided to focus on students whose principal language is English and students without special needs.  Those two decisions cut the amount of information I had found in half. 

    
A lot of today’s students' writing seemed to lack much thought.  I started to watch them closely as they wrote, and I found that they did not revise.  They would edit in the most basic sense.  Students would type up their first drafts, take a quick scan at the screen for glaring errors, hit the Spell check button, and follow that by directly hitting the print button.  Revision was reduced to a quick glance and a semi-effective spell check.  Too often, revision means correction.  I believe that revision should be the most cognitive of all steps in the writing process.  Where students were spending the least amount of time, I feel that they should be spending the most thought.  This was the problem that I wanted to solve.  Of all the steps in the writing process, revision became my focus.

     
I was still confronted with an excessive amount of research.  I made one last, crucial decision that was to help me shape my final focus.  I would focus only on word processing software.  By selecting only word processing software, I eliminated other programs that were designed for presentations, such as Microsoft Power Point, and chat software, whether synchronous or asynchronous.  Word processing software, such as Microsoft Word or Corel Word Perfect, is the software that my students and I use the most, and therefore we are all more comfortable with standard word processing software.  I feel that most districts can provide basic word processing, so any conclusions or suggestions that I offer will be applicable to any writing teacher.  Implementing any strategies that I have found during my research would not require any additional cost to my district.  

     
Finally, I had narrowed my focus.  I will take this opportunity to contend that the use of word processing software can promote students to explore and fully realize the potential of the revision process.  I will navigate through this area by answering several questions.  Why is revision important?  How do word processors help revision? How is technology changing the writing process?  I will also offer strategies and tips to best utilize word processing software.


Why is revision important?
How do word processors help revision?
Changes in the writing process
Revision Strategies & Tips
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